Wednesday, December 7, 2011

The Bedroom Window

Just a reminder (because no one has glanced at it since I posted it), Tib #3 is posted up there in the Tiberius tab. Tomorrow, #4 goes up: The Cop. Next week, in part 5, the man with no eyes will be introduced. Don't miss out!

You can leave me a comment here about the current chapter if you so desire.


  1. Very cool to see you posting these up. I'm eager to learn about the man with no eyes. From today's part, let me just comment on this:

    "As he drifted off to sleep, a shadow gradually emerged into the square of moonlight on his wall. The silhouette of a man. If he had been awake to see, he would have found that there was no one standing outside his house to make the shadow."

    I love this description especially. Paints such a good picture, and is a little bit creepy. Well done!

  2. Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying them. And I'm equally glad that you're commenting on them. I'm having a hard time judging reaction due to the low volume of comments, some of which is to do with the fact that there just aren't that many people looking at the page at all.

    So I appreciate that you're reading and commenting!

    And the man with no eyes is coming...